As I mentioned in last week’s post, I’ve been developing the scenes in my YA work-in-progress, and identifying what needs to be there and what doesn’t.
Revisiting the Plot Arc
I tried something that I think has identified some major problems with my story structure.
I went back to my plot arc and listed the important scenes from memory.
Next I looked at the plot arc/diagram to see if there was rising tension in my scenes.
From examining my plot arc, this is what I learned:
It’s not that I don’t have enough action, it’s just that it’s in the wrong places.
I have some big action scenes, but they are basically all over the place so ‘rising tension’ is missing from my novel.
I had to go back to my plot arc and rearrange the scenes – change what happens when – and I think it works so much better.
Sometimes you need to be able to take a step back and look at a snapshot of your manuscript. It works for me:)
Conflict in Scenes
Now that I have the order right, I’m looking at each individual scene to see if there’s enough conflict.
I’m asking myself the following questions:
- What physical obstacles have I placed in my character’s way?
- How has setting contributed – how has it made things worse for my character?
- What happens in the scene to make things worse for my character?
- Based on what has just happened, what new decisions will my main character have to make?
- Why will this scene make the reader keep reading?
- Do I really need this scene?
- Is this scene in the right place?Do you have any tips on how to develop scenes?Please feel free to share them in the comments section of this post.I hope you’re having an inspiring writing week.Happy writing:)