Once a Creepy Crocodile

Being a bush poet from way back, I’ve always been a big fan of Waltzing Matilda so I was really looking forward to reading Once a Creepy Crocodile, a picture book written to the same rhyming meter. I wasn’t disappointed.

Unknown-3Once a Creepy Crocodile, written by Peter Taylor and illustrated by Nina Rycroft is full of the things that young readers love; colour, humour and some scary bits.

9781743467282 It’s the story of a baby brolga who catches a lurking crocodile’s eye and is invited to join him for tea.

And his tail waggled and wiggled while he winked and grinned and giggled saying,
‘Please come and join me for afternoon tea’.

Luckily, the brolga is kept from harm by the animals of the billabong.

Afternoon tea has never been so dangerous! (Or fun!)

Once a Creepy Crocodile is a riot of colour that lends itself to being an entertaining classroom read or whole family fun.

Unknown-2It’s the kind of book that could also be performed in the classroom with different students taking on the different animal roles in the story.

There’s a cheeky twist at the end that will leave young readers giggling – and Nina Rycroft has illustrated the perfect afternoon tea.

Kids will love the engaging animals and the entertaining illustration detail in Once a Creepy Crocodile.

This book comes with its own singalong CD. Once a Creepy Crocodile is published by The Five Mile Press

Picture Book Writing Tips – Alison Reynolds Shares her ‘Marmalade’ Story

Today I am thrilled to welcome my very special crit buddy and great writerly friend, Alison Reynolds to DeeScribe Writing.

As well as being a fantastic crit buddy, Alison is the author of over 30 books for children and adults.

She’s here to celebrate the release of her wonderful new Picture book, A Year With Marmalade. It’s a very cute book with a compelling story and wonderful illustrations by the very talented Heath McKenzie.

I’m going to start with a review of Alison’s new book, but I have to warn you that I may be biased on several counts: I love Alison and Heath’s work and I love cats.

But I have seen A Year With Marmalade develop from a three simple elements; girl, a cat and a picture of autumn leaves, into a heartwarming story about friendship and change.

Ella’s best friend Maddy is going away for a year and she asks Ella to look after her beloved cat, Marmalade. But Ella and Marmalade don’t exactly take to each other and they both miss Maddy.

Over the course of the year their friendship blossoms like the tree in Ella’s garden. When Maddy comes back, Marmalade manages to slot perfectly into both Maddy and Ella’s lives.

In A Year With Marmalade, Ella and Marmalade’s friendship mirrors the four seasons and all the changes are beautifully depicted by illustrator, Heath McKenzie. I fell in love with the gorgeous, green-eyed Marmalade – a cat with attitude.

A Year With Marmalade is published by The Five Mile Press. It’s a great book to share with young readers and to invite discussion about friendship and change.

WIN A COPY OF A YEAR WITH MARMALADE

DeeScribe Writing is Alison’s first stop on her blog tour to celebrate the release of her new book.

During the tour, she’s running a competition so you can win a FREE copy of this special book just by sharing a picture showing the personality of a special cat in your life.

Here’s what to do:

Marmalade’s   personality really shines through in Alison Reynolds and Heath McKenzie’s newest picture book A Year with Marmalade.

Share your favourite picture showing your cat’s personality to win. The winner will receive a signed copy of A Year with Marmalade and a copy of the picture book Lighty Faust the Lion, a book about a much bigger cat.

Share your favourite picture of   your cat by uploading it to author Alison Reynolds’ Facebook page at https://www.facebook.com/alison.reynolds.524 or email it to Alison as a low res jpeg file at alrey@msn.com.au and she’ll upload it on her website www.alisonreynolds.com.au

Entries close on the 1st of   September.

ALISON’S PICTURE BOOK WRITING TIPS

Today, Alison is sharing some of her favourite picture book writing tips.

Five tips for picture book writers

1.  Be prepared to do lots and lots of drafts.

I often start with a vague idea and play with it and see what emerges. Often I find that I end up with a totally different story, which is always better than my first try. A Year with Marmalade started with a little girl, the seasons, jealousy, a cat and a bird. It morphed into a cat, two little girls and a story of friendship and that change isn’t always a bad thing!

Themes seem to have a habit of emerging as the book improves.

2. Learn to think in double spreads and the physicality of a picture book.

Think of each spread as a scene, and when you turn the page the curtain closes and there’s a new scene on the next page. I buy visual diaries and copy my words in them so I can check on the flow. I also always write illustration guidelines. This helps me check that there is actually something different to illustrate on each spread.

3.  Don’t have too many words!

You have pictures to help tell the story too! Make the most of it. I cut A Year with Marmalade by one third, and it improved it! I like to see how low in word count I can go.

4. Don’t submit too soon

I like to live with the picture book for a while and peck away at it, removing a word here, or changing a word there. I wrote a completely different story first, and then an entirely new one that ended up being A Year with Marmalade.

5.  Find a great crit partner.

My crit partner always improves my books. (Thanks, Dee.) I tend to complicate things. In A Year with Marmalade, I needed to make the cat climb up a stile over the fence. Why wouldn’t the cat just jump over anywhere? So I was starting to think barbed wire, booby traps etc. The brilliant Dee suggested a cat-flap. This is my favourite part of the book.

BLOG TOUR STOPS

You can follow Alison and Heath on tour as they visit these great blogs:

Blog Tour

7th  August  Dee White

https://deescribewriting.wordpress.com/

9th  August  Karen Tyrrell

http://www.karentyrrell.com/tag/karens-blog/

11th August  Tania McCartney

http://www.kids-bookreview.com/

13th August  Pass It On

http://jackiehoskingpio.wordpress.com/school-magazine/

14th August  Kathryn Apel

http://katswhiskers.wordpress.com/blog/

17th August  Dale Harcombe

http://orangedale.livejournal.com/

20th August  Peter Taylor

http://writing-for-children.blogspot.com.au/

22nd August  Susan Stephenson

http://www.thebookchook.com

23rd August  Robyn Opie Parnell

http://robynopie.blogspot.com.au/

27th August  Sally Odgers

http://spinningpearls.blogspot.com.au/

29th  August  Angela Sunde

http://angelasunde.blogspot.com.au/

31st August Chris Bell

http://christinemareebell.wordpress.com/