When I was in LA last year I met some amazing US authors. Today I’m thrilled to welcome one of them to DeeScribe Writing. Laura Elliott is the author of wonderful YA novels, Winnemucca, 13 on Halloween and her latest book, Transfer Student.

Today Laura is going to talk about how she wrote this page turning book and you can win a free ebook copy.


TRANSFER STUDENT will release on Amazon and Barnes & Noble March 20th. Here’s a little bit about the novel and a note from Laura about her inspirations for the story and her writing challenges. Be sure to read to the end to enter to win the EBOOK GIVEAWAY and this week’s SWAG!

Two Worlds––Two Teens––One Wish

Geek Rhoe and Surfer Ashley would never be friends.

Even if they lived on the same planet.

But, they’ll become so much more.

They’ll transfer.

Earthling Ashley’s world revolves around winning daily popularity contests at Beverly Hills High School and surfing competitions with sweet scholarship prizes that will finally help her break free of her control-freak mother. Ashley never loses. Ashley never wishes on stars. But that changes when her senior class takes a field trip to the Griffith Observatory where Ashley’s conflicting feelings about her predatory best frenemy Tiffany, throws Ashley’s carefully-crafted Queen of B.H.H.S. title under the bus.

Meanwhile on planet Retha, Rhoe misses his dad, loves his mom’s home-cooked Glechy crag with a side of Ory sauce, is desperate to heal his sick brother and wants more than anything to win The Retha New Invention Competition. He and his best friend Yuke have worked for the past two years constructing the teleporting telescope Rhoe started building with his dad before an accident killed him. Rhoe’s never kissed a girl. Rhoe’s hero is the eccentric physicist, Ramay. But that changes when the telescope teleports Rhoe across the universe with an unintended side-effect. Ashley and Rhoe transfer––swap lives––when they make the same wish at the same time.

Popular-surfer-turned-boy-geek alien Ashley must handle life on Retha as Rhoe complete with webbed feet, low-gravity, and an obsession with Yuke, all the while being hunted by Rethan spies and resenting her hairy, flat chest. Boy-geek-turned-popular-surfer Rhoe must fit in at Beverly Hills High School as Ashley, compete in The Laguna Beach Invitational without becoming shark food, dodge boys’ affections, cool his preoccupation with Tiffany and his new body, on his quest to find the healing rocks he believes will save his brother’s life.

If only it were that simple. Some wishes can’t come true. Some have to. How far would you go for someone you love?


I wrote the first draft of Transfer Student in 2006 after my father-in-law died. It was a crazy, sad time. I was working at the Los Angeles Times on the re-opening of the Griffith Observatory [it had been closed for five years for renovations] and we were back-and-forth between LA and Fresno [a four hour drive from LA], more and more frequently as my father-in-law got worse and worse, eventually ending up on life support. His name was Ray. I named the Reathan word for “year” in his honor.

After Ray passed, just hours after, it was nighttime and my husband Joe, his mom and I all sat out on my mother-in-law’s patio and looked at the stars. She said she knew Ray was up there, one of the stars. And that’s all it took. I had the beginnings of a story about souls that traveled, that starjumped, through space. And I wanted to explore the idea of a parallel planet similar to Earth, a sister planet. Retha is that planet and an anagram for Earth.

There were other things that inspired the story too. Los Angeles was a major inspiration because I raised my kids there and I love the city. So I knew that the female protagonist would be from LA. And since I worked in entertainment for a time, I knew Beverly Hills would be a lot of fun to write about.

I also wrote about places I had more of a connection to––Griffith Park and Zuma beach. And lastly, a news story that unfolded over the years further inspired the plot as I wrote and rewrote Transfer Student.

This same news story is also why I decided to tell Transfer Student from two POVs, a teenage girl and a teenage boy alien. The news story profiled the hostilities surrounding a man who announced he would be having an operation to become a woman. Because he was an official in a municipality in the southern U.S. this was a very public, personal announcement. It made national news at the time. It captured my attention for a variety of reasons and I knew that I wanted to write a story about how the vessel that a soul inhabits doesn’t define it. The soul itself does.

A story that’s been written perhaps a million times, but I wanted to write about in a way that explored many things: what it means to love; what it means to be a boy or a girl; what it means to risk everything to become who you really are. Transfer Student is a classic fish-out-of-water story that I’ve written as a love letter to teens and also as a way for all of us to see a piece of ourselves in everyone we meet, no matter our differences, no matter what planet we call home.

As far as the actual writing of the story I had a few challenges. I had no idea how to write from a male POV. My early drafts really show that weakness. I always wrote Ashley in the first person. But, I’d always write Rhoe from the third person, as if I was literarily tip-toeing up to the first person present that he’s written in today.

I have no idea how many drafts I’ve written of Transfer Student. But I do know that in order to get to first person present I had to write in the third and past too so I could be sure that the first person present was the only way to tell the story I wanted to tell. There is nothing more immediate than first person present, in my humble opinion. And I want the reader to be on the journey as it happens. To feel and discover with the characters. I want the reader to starjump with the characters and experience the longing and awkwardness that comes when you try to figure out a new world. There was only one tense that would do––first person present.

I hope Transfer Student sounds like a story you’d like to read. Thanks so much for hosting me today, Dee. Here’s to wishing on stars!


1.            Follow @Laurawriting on twitter.

2.            Tweet this message:

Can’t wait to read Transfer Student by @Laurawriting Check out the Blog Tour & Giveaway! #teenreads #scifi #romance #ya <>

3. Comment at the end of the Transfer Student post with a link to your twitter profile.


  1. Sheryl, Karen & Angela 🙂 Thanks so much for your kind words. Sheryl….a family of scientists! My YOU ARE LUCKY:) I love stargazing. Thanks for your tweet. Karen…so happy you stopped by Dee’s amazing blog today! Thanks for helping to spread the word about TRANSFER STUDENT. #gratitude. Angela…I’ve entered you:) Just email me your address in case you win I’m at elliwrite [at] yahoo [dot] com 🙂 DEE thanks for hosting Ashley & Rhoe’s story. I’m so lucky to have met such a gifted writer! *waves* from CA where it’s Monday 3/12 is just about over:)

  2. Lovely to have you visiting, Laura and you know how much I enjoyed reading your book.

    Tuesday is almost over here:) We may get more visitors interested in entering the competition. People are very relaxed/busy here in Australia and they often meander over a day or so after the post is up:)

    Hope the rest of your tour goes well:)

    Dee xx

  3. A fascinating process. It puts me in mind of a juggler, keeping all those balls in the air. (I think this may be why I don’t write YA – I’ve not got the co-ordination for it!!) Enjoy your globe-trotting tour. Are you planning a stop off on planet Retha? 😉

    Thanks for sharing, Dee. I am definitely one of the relaxed ones. Swing past a blog and read multiple posts… xx

  4. What a great interview, Dee & Laura and what a fascinating premise! Laura, I loved hearing about the inspiration for your novel & am in awe of you writing in 1st & 3rd person as well as past & present tense to find what worked. Now that there is commitment! Hope the book is a runaway success.

  5. Dear katswhiskers, YES! I’m traveling to Retha today in a way. I’m making the trailer for the book and trying to represent it virtually. It’s so fun to try and “see” it in a video. #ihopeitdurnsoutwell

    Tania, Thanks so much for the good wishes:) And thanks for stopping by the tour!

    Karen, Thanks so much for your kind words. I guess it’s less about commitment and more about not really know what the heck I’m doing half the time:) hee-hee Here’s to wishing on stars!!!

    Dee….I gotchya…Okee-dokee I’ll breathe deep and give lots of room for the relaxed ones to show up and hang out. Also, any of my good friends from OZ who don’t Twitter go ahead and send me an email and I’ll enter you in the giveaway! 🙂 elliwrite [at] yahoo [dot] com ! Good luck with the giveaways!

  6. Thanks for being a part of the tour, Dee!! Laura, It’s so much fun to hear about where the idea of the story came from and why you wrote things the way you did : ) thanks for sharing that with us! I can’t wait to read the whole book!!

  7. Oops! Helps if I leave my Twitter name here 🙂 I was on my phone for my first comment and it made reading the fine print a little tricky! I’m @KarenCollum.

Comments are closed.